Our society develops abruptly and people follow the changes. On media, people can get information’s and knowledge’s throughout about the world. Movies and televisions influence heavily has a big influence on our lives and it is people's responsibilities to use the media in positive way. Some people argue that the media gives a negative affect effect to people such as porn pornography and gossips through out . Through movies may lead teenagers or children may be led into bad results directions. However, mature people do know how to distinguish what to follow and what to avoid. People can get the information’s through movies or television easily. I believe television and movie can influence positively in people's behaviour.
First of all, through out (throughout 이라는 표현은 “전체적”이라는 뜻이기 때문에 여기에는 적합하지 않습니다.) movies and television programs, we could get various kinds of information easily such as history, art, biology and any kinds many more. As people gain visual information’s rather than reading books, it remains in our brain longer than letters and people can easily absorb them.
Secondly, it helps us to learn another abroad about other foriegn countries. As I considered A lot on my listening skill of in English improved because I used to watch foreign television programs and it helped me to raise develop my listening skills. Other than siting sitting and listening to English tapes in front of my desk, I watched drama soap operas (드라마라는 단어는 우리나라에서 그렇게 표현하지만 외국에서는 다른 뜻을 가지고 있습니다. 혹시 tv연속극을 말씀하시는 거면 soap opera 라는 말을 씁니다) in English and I had fun with it.
In conclusion, there are many cases of people who had succeeded through out television. (이 문장을 번역하자면 “끝으로, tv를 통해 성공한 사람은 많다” 인데요. 조금 어색한 것 같네요) We are living in ㅁ a global world now. Television and movies are good stepping stones to developing ourselves. Through out Throughout (thourghout는 두 단어가 아닌 한 단어 입니다) the visual information’s we could have gain interests in various kinds of subjects.
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From bj: 전체적으로 흐름도 좋고 내용도 좋지만 가끔식 “affect 가 아닌 effect”처럼 간단한 grammatical error 이있어요~ 이런건 proof reading 만 해도 고쳐지니깐 괜찮을 것 같아요~
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