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It is often said that it is better to do one project completely before starting another project / one. <전에 project라는 단어가 나왔기 때문에, one으로 대체해도 상관 없습니다> Some people may be opposed to this statement because working with multiple projects at the same time save more time than doing one project. However, I strongly support the idea of performing one project step by step for two main reasons: to concentrate more easily and to decrease number of mistakes.
To begin with, people can easily concentrate on doing one project completely / perfectly. This is mainly because people don't have need any other many burdens to solve the problems. <제가 맞게 이해한지 모르겠습니다. 확인해주세요>
For example, my brother didn't get good grades at test. My mom advised to him that he had to concentrate on doing one subject at test a time. Some experts have verified that the best way to get good grades for students is have to try to when they concentrate on one subject. Thus, I believe that completely finishing one project at a time completely is more efficient among people the different methods. 부사)는 꾸며주는 동사와 가까이 있어야 되고요. At a time을 넣어서 한번 할 때 마다 한 개씩을 끝낸다 라는 뜻으로 만들어 주면 더 이해하기가 쉬울 것 같네요 ^^>
In addition, people can decrease lots of mistakes. One significant reason is that people usually make many errors if they perform many tasks at a time. For instance, my sister liked to cook for their her families whenever she has had free time. <시제를 하나로 맞춰주세요> After finishing to cooking, she always caught a cold because of sudden working which she did while cooking. Some studies have indicated that hasty and sudden doing of something one sometimes results in many mistakes and bad effects. <주어를 잘 보시고, 단수인지 복수인지 확인하셔서 동사를 그에 맞게 변화시켜주세요> In this sense, doing one project completely can decrease and cause a lot of good effects.
In conclusion, doing one something step by step seems to be slow but this process is more efficient and people can be easily concentrated to do on it.
As I mentioned above, people usually can't do multiple tasks completely perfectly and without errors and thus they have to do it slowly with thinking. <목적어를 넣어주세요. 그리고 slow는 여기서 형용사가 아닌 부사로 역할 해야 하기 때문에 –ly를 붙여줘서 부사로 만들어줍니다>
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