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Some people may argue that people would not invest to into pets. However, I have a different idea. I think that people should invest to into pets.
People can relieve stress, because pets can make people happy. Putting it differently, when dogs meet their owner, most of dogs them like their boss and they shake their tail when they meet their boss because they are happy to see their owner, and That is why people feels feel happy and they can relieve stress. For example, many South Koreans feel extremely high stress, because they are always threatened by North Korea's nuclear bomb and missiles, and these factors make South Koreans to have stress. Therefore, I strongly believe that relieving stress is very important to modern people, because todays' people of today get high stress from their work, and that is why investing to pets is highly likely reasonable.
Pets can help people effectively, and this is why investing to into their animal is necessary. In other words, some trained dogs can help blinded people, and they can help their boss owner to exercise. 는 서로 관계를 대비 할 때 사용됩니다. 지금 같은 경우에는 서로 비교 할게 없기 때문에 쓰시면 안됩니다> and Moreover, pets could act like navigator. Putting it differently, pets can protect their boss from danger and hunt for food and they can make their boss to exercise. <같은 아이디어의 반복입니다 ^^>For example, Eskimo people use their pets to hunt games <무슨 뜻인지 모르겠습니다> and for transportation. And many people in the world used their horses to transport as means of transportation and pets have to pee on the outside, and that is why their boss has to go outside with their pets. <에세이와 관계 없는 아이디어 같네요> This makes people to exercise in the outside. Therefore, investing to pets is highly reasonable.
In conclusion, people should invest to into their pets. First, pets can relieve their boss' stress. Second, they can help people in different ways.
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