■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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▶ Topic :
Although many people care about the environment, the current environmental situation will not improve in the future. Do you agree or disagree? | |
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▶ Your Answer :
There is an argument over whether or not the current environmental situation will not improve in the future. Many people believe that environmental situation is too serious to make better. My point of view, however, is that efforts of improving the polluted nature can be effected on the world. First, environment should be constantly cared for no more pollution. Second, caring about the environment has an effect on it.
Most of all, if people do not effort to rescuer the environment, it becomes really unable to save. Let me show an example to prove why people should care it without pause. These days, on average global temperatures are warmest ever. It is true that global warming has a negative effect on mankind throughout the world. A lot of garbage and consumed chemical resources by people becomes this atmosphere. It causes that floods and landslides took lives of countless people as well as putting affected areas at health risk. European nations were no exception. Many other nations also suffered frequent flood and wildfires. Unfortunately, it cost an astronomical amount of money to restore damaged buildings and other constructions back to normal. Under this circumstance, people may be unable to deal with pollution of environment any more. In this reason, continuing caring about the nature environment is necessary for people to keep from becoming untouchable thing.
Furthermore, activities for saving environment are not only positive, but also have effects on it. A report conducted by a journalist at New York Times proves that it is able to become. There was a village that has extremely polluted environment including earth, air, woods and outside of constructions. Polluted atmosphere that was manly because of CO2 of cars and coal-burning plants made children’s noses sneezing constantly. Besides, it was nature that every soil was put at healthy risk without people’s considering dumping. Additionally, woods could not only grow on unhealthy soil, but also not prevent village from natural disaster such as flood or landslides. In constant fear of upcoming disasters, everybody both in the public and private sectors were joining hands to go green. A growing number of people now use buses and subways on their way to work and home as well as separate their trash. Surprisingly, the village’s entire environment becomes clean and healthy to be able to keep people from disasters.
In conclusion, I disagree that it is of no use for the current environment to be cared by many people. First, no more pollution is made by continuing caring. Second, caring activities have definitely positive effects on the entire environment. | |
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