“When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.” Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and exmaples to explain your position. |
It is controversal on the quotation that when people succeed, if is because of hard work or luck. Some people believe successful people had enough luck to have a chance that would make them successful. However, I strongly believe that it is hard work that makes people successful, not luck. The rationale behind this is that only prepared people with hard work can grasp opportunity when it comes. Also, success is maintained only through consistent hard work. To begin with, only prepared people with hard work can seize the opportunity when it comes. If people are not prepared for success with hard work, they wouldn’t capture the chance even it comes to them by luck. For example, Yong-jun Bae, the most famous Korean actor in Asia, only played small parts at first. With the dream that he wanted to be the main character in the play, he always pracitced acting the main charcater by himself everyday. One day, the actor for the main character had a car accident that made him unable to act in the play. Bae went to the director and talked to him that he asked him to give a vacant part for him showing the director what he had practiced everyday. Finally, his dream came true, and he became very famous for the play. Conversly, if he had not prepared for the opportunites that might come to him by any chances, he couldn’t use the luck, and he wouldn’t have been able to become successful. In addition, success is maintained only by hard work. People should work hard continuously to stay on the top in competitive society. It is even shown in the university society. To clarify, people who gets scholoarships are seemed to have good fortune. In fact, they study very hard, staying up all night, giving up to meet their friend to get a good grades for keeping their scholorships. Thus, scholorship winners are not just lucky people, but hard workers. To sum up, I am convinced that success is not achieved with luck, but hard work. This is because only hard working people can seize and use luck in their success, and also success is not a kind of thing that is made with luck at once. Even if some people could have a chance to success with a very good luck, they couldn’t hold it without consistent hard work.
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