As the world has industrialized, the number of rural areas is decreasing, swifting more people to the developed cities. Some people argue that it is better to live in city for the reason that city provide many benefits. However I strongly believe that it is better for children to live in countryside. This is beucase it give them safer surroundings than city and healthful and natural environment.
To start with, countryside is much safer than city. This is mainly because the city contains many dangerous factors , such as the excessive number of car and high rate of crime, and children are less careful and more curious than adults. That is, they are easily involved to many different accidents compared to adults. Moreover, parents cannot take care of them all day in order to prevent accidents. For example, Seoul, the capital city in Korea, is well prepared for people's safety. However, the number of accidents of children is many more than one in the countryside. Even though there are many systems and laws to protect children in Seoul, they cannot prefectly prevent inevitable accidents. As this example reveals, living in countryside is beneficial in that parents raise their children.
On top of that, countryside provide children with healthful and natural environment. Even though developed city provides many different conveniences and easy access to whatever people need, its environment is seriously polluted by by-poducts like smoke. This pollution has a strongly negative effect on growing children. this hinder them from growing correctly. Moreover, it could occur serious diseases in their body. According to research recently studied, studnets who grow up in countryside are more healthy and strong physically than students who grow up in city. This study plainly highlights the significance of healthful evironment for children's health.
In conclusion, I firmly beilieve growing in countryside is more beneficial than in city. This is because countryside confers safe circumstance and salubrious environment for growth. Even though benefits of living in citiy is appealing, the advantages of living in countryside far outweigh other's advantages. |