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감사 합니다!
주제 - 행복한 직업이 좋습니까, 하이 샐러리 직업이 좋습니까?
After graduation, when it comes to looking for a job, people consider several aspects of
the job that is offered. They might be reputation of the company, salary, and the location
of the company. Some people think that high salary is the most important factor when
they choose a job. In my opinion, however, being happy with a job is more important
than a 7-digit salary job.
First of all, if people feel content with a job, they do their best to accomplish the project.
There are two kinds of motivation. One is from outside such as a reward and a high salary
while the other is from inside the person. Motivation from inside makes people do their
best to finish the job just for their satisfaction. Therefore, usaually people who are
happy with their job have inner motivation than extrinsic motivation, which makes
them fully and voluntarily concentrated on their job.
Moreover, to live a healthy life, being happy with a job is much more important than
having a high wage job. Thesedays, many career people are suffering from job related
stress which causes serious health problems such as heart stroke and cancer. Generally
speaking, the job that gives a high wage demands businessmen to work most of his
time. Therefore, it is not difficult to witness that an eminent businessman suddenly
fells down with a heart stroke caused by hard working.
For these reason, I strongly agree that being happy with a job has much more benefits
than having a high salary job. If people are happy and content with a job, they are willing
to accomplish their work doing their best. What’s more, people can live healthy lives if
they really like job, while usually a high wage job makes people slaves of their work.