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Topic : Television advertising directed toward children under the age of five should not be allowed
Advertisements have become necessary in selling products. They usually aim toward housewives since most female love shopping. However, some propagandas began to have an eye on children under age of five for marketing. Youngster has no knowledge about money, advertising toward children under age of five should not happen.
Friends and teachers usually influence us on many things such as studies and sports. Some people might be persuaded by advisors in school. Nevertheless most of us are more affected by our fellow classmates than teachers because buddies are closer than teachers.
T: People learn more by watching television than by reading books
Television and books are educational resources that tend to teach us a lot of things such as history and mathematics. There is more information in a written document than television programs. However, shows like documentaries and English programs can teach us more than books can. Therefore we can learn more things through television than books.
T: In order to stay well-informed, people should get information from various news sources
There are lots of various News sources around the world such as BBC and New York Times. However, people tend to read or watch only one sort of News. Mankind should read many types of News resource to gain more accurate information.
T: Telephone had had a greater effect on people lives than the telephone has
Television and telephone are one of the most necessary appliances in home. Television for instance can give us live information though News, not only that it can also entertain, scare, and thrill us through shows. Telephones don't have much function as it. However, it can be used in emergency cases and secret meeting. To evaluate its function, telephone is more useful than television.
T: Universities and high schools should teach students about specific careers and fields instead of general subjects
High school and universities teachers teach general education. Though it is important, many people believe students should begin studying the specific subject when they are in high school. Basics we learn in grade school is enough. High school and university should only teach the certain subject.
T: The purpose of television should be for education, not for entertainment
Television shows us programs such as comedy and education. Most of these shows are entertainment, so, therefore many people think television is for it. However, there are some educational programs that can teach us a lot of things. Television isn't just for entertainment.
T: The ability to cooperate with others is more important today than in the past
Cooperation has been practiced since the human was created because we are a social animal. Some people might think working together is not important as it used to be. Still, there are times when we need to stick together. Cases such as global warming and developement of technology, can't be done alone.