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Some people say that it is more important to give students prizes and awards for student’s effort than achievement. Personally, I agree with the statement for two reasons. First, students can build self -confidence. Second, students will cheat if they only judged by the efforts.
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To begin with, students will build their self -confidence. Some people may say that it is more important to give student prizes and awards for student’s achievement. However, student’s self-confidence will be gained when the prizes are given for their efforts. Let me take a middle school for example. The school is known for it’s easy going and friendly teachers. School offers diverse after-school activities. These activities encourage students to develop their talents and learn how to cooperate with others. Also, through these they relive stress. Teachers often praise students for their efforts and find their strong points. Students who gained confidence stay focused in their class and study on their own with out studying stress. To conclude, I agree that prizes and awards should be given to students for their efforts not the achievement. This is because students will gain self-confidence.
Lastly, judging only by student’s achievement will make them cheat. Many students cheated on the national college entrance exam. They send test answers to their friends on cell phones, because they can attend top university if they got high score. So Therefore(So를 문장 시작할 때 쓰는건 좋지 않아여`)they do not think about efforts or process. They are mainly focused on the achievement. For conclusion, students should be awarded for their efforts. This is because they will cheat for good achievement.
For conclusion, it is more important to give students prizes and awards for student’s effort than achievement for two reasons. First, students will build self-confidence. Second, judging only by student’s achievement will make them cheat.
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