Zoos serve no practical function. |
When I was young, my favorite place for my school's field trip was zoo. I was always excited the day before my field trip. I believe one of the most popular places for children will be zoo since they can see things that are unique and alive. However as I grow up, I think zoo serves no practical function. Eventhough we can have fun in there, there are lots of defects. ( Wow big contrast. you totally smashed my expectation at the last sentence)
One of the flaws is the zoo harms animals. I agree with that zoo is a great place to amuse and have a wonderful time with our friends and family. but did you ever think about the animals who suffer in there?(DO NOT USE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! big minus point) --> However, animals are suffering badly in the zoo.(i don't think this is the best solution but...)
Since they are moved into small cages from their immense habitant, jungle, they feel like they are trapped. I believe animals in cages have the same feelings as the people who are in the jail. Also, when many people come to watch and take pictures of them, the animals may also have same sensation with famous entertainments with paparazzo. Getting flashes of camera and being watched by the people everyday can make them get stressed and irritated. ( these things are happening right now so please do not use future tense)
Another side effect of the zoo is that zoo is actually a waste of money and domain. To maintain the zoo with lots of visitors, it needs to be clean and interesting. Did you thought about the water the zoo uses everyday to clean the cage and the animals? For the animal who live in the water, the zoo needs to replace with unpolluted water frequently. This may cost them a lot and also, it will be not beneficial for our country Korea, since it has limited amount of water to use. (this can affect not only Korea but also all the other countries. fix it! ) The domain will also be used a lot in this small country Korea, to keep the big animals like elephants or bears, they need a big place for them.(oh really? they give elephants tiny space just let them stand generally) very good reason why the zoo is bad. but remember! toelf test is world wide. I am being mean( sorry) but if you wanna score over 20 you gotta remember)
Moreover, to entice people to come, the zoo will decorate zoo as same as a jungle. This also costs much .
In conclusion, I believe zoo serve no practical function because it harms animals and requires lots of money and domain to keep on going. I think people should think about the defects that I mentioned before going to the zoo. The poor animals in the zoo and the countless resources that the zoo use.
goood good 19-23 just watch out some grammetical errors.
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