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Some people say that it is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study mathematics and science. That is because students can learn the way their countries have walked, and then know how to do when they face difficulties by studying history and literature. In contrast, I cannot accept this idea. Followings are siginificant reasons to support my idea.
Firstly, students can develop their creativity and thinking skills. History and literature only make students memorize important things. But mathematics and science need students to think differently and variously. For example, students should memorize when 'The 2nd War of World' happened to get a good score in history exam. On the other hand, students must understand the process a formula is made and why the formula is made. So, students can attain how to think in various view by studying mathematics and science.
Additionally, all of things in the Earth are made by developement of mathematics and science. For instance, a pencil which students always use and see has surprising secrets to make it. In other words, pencil makers must think how much carbon should be included and how centimeters it can be. There are mathematics and science in even very small and useless things.
To sum up, I firmly believe that it is mare important for students to study mathematics and science than it is for them to study history and literature because students are able to improve their creavity and thinking skiils and find secrets which are hided in all of things.
평가 부탁 드려요.. 그리고 제가 시험을 쳐본적이 없는데 이 정도면 몇점 받을수 있을까요? |