■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Some people prefer having other people making decisions for them while some other people prefer to make those on their own | |
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Every single person’s life requires many times for decision making at a different times to each individuals.
Since major decisions can change and reshape people’s lives greatly, people often tend to seek someone else’s advices and comments when they stand at crossroads of not getting clear decisions immediately, rather expecting answers from other people’s view. However, we all know that nobody can be able to live our lives for favor instead of ourselves. What if the decisions made from other which have been thought as good would turn into wrong or bring bad results than before in the end?
Who can we blame the wrong decision made? Since letting other people make decisions itself is also a decision, all causes and responsibilities for any results should be taken ourselves. I definitely believe the final decisions must be come out from ourselves, not from other people, even though we love to listen what other people’s think.
When we make decision by ourselves we can take our own responsibilities on what we decided and can be more reliable than those decided by other people.
First of all, the responsibilities on our own decisions must be stronger and stay longer as we must have been thought over to get them. In this sense, the decisions from our own take higher responsibilities and belief that what we have decided is right. By taking strong responsibilities will secure our own decisions better, then those have more likelihood to turn out to be good and right decisions we think in the end. If the decisions would result in bad in the mean time, we can also ascribe them to ourselves to help to criticize and analyze what have been wrong to make those decisions and then be able to learn things not to make or less make wrong decisions in the future.
Another reason why decision making by ourselves is important is it is simply more reliable. Suppose we just listen whatever decision other people have made, we will feel very insecure and constantly doubt for a certain while till the decisions come out right or wrong. It is, in other word, an indicator how stronger we can believe our own decisions than those from other people. If decisions are more reliable, we can feel more confident and better satisfaction over them. Reliability on decisions can not be gotten from other people, but from ourselves we should know.
Overall, our lives are full of times making decisions that we might need to listen what other people think, however since decisions from our own take higher responsibilities and stronger reliability, people need to decide their important decisions on their own. | |
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