Nowadays, people live in an ever-changing world owing to the internet. It is said that people are living on the Internet, shopping, entertaining, and learning because it is very convenient and fast. Especially for learning, students can learn effectively in the aspects of time saving and lots of sources. Therefore, in my opinion, internet is an effective educational tool for students.
First of all, students can learn in any where and any time with Internet. If a student can access to the internet, he can also access to learning. In the past days, students can only depend on school and educational institutions to learn. It took much time and money than using Internet. In addition, with the Internet students can have feedbacks whenever they have questions even though they study in the midnight or abroad. They no longer need to go to school and ask questions to teachers and peers. 그렇죠. 그렇지만 more하다는 걸 설명하지는 못합니다.
Moreover, the Internet offers a variety of educational sources. In the past, usually pictures, books, and audio materials were used as educational aids. Thesedays, however, students are studying with video clips, web-sites and hyperlinks on the Internet. It is a much more effective way of learning because students can look up and refer as many sources as possible related to the lessons if they want to find them.
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For these reasons, I definitely agree that using the Internet is an effective way of learning for students. Students can learn whenever they want to study in anywhere, and they can interact with teachers and peers for feedback right away. In addition, students are studying with lots of useful learning materials when they are studying with the Internet. Therefore, in the near future, students might not need to go to school, and all they need might be only the Internet.