Some people may argue that it is good for us to encourage hawks and other birds of prey to nest on city buildings since they eat mice, rats, and other pests, which is bad for human.
질문을 그대로 쓰시는것은 그다지 좋지 않아요 :)
However, given the choice between to accept and to reject them, I would choose the latter because they will bring many problems in the long run. Moerover, their nests on city buildingsis are really eyesore.
그냥 problem이라고 하는것은 너무 광범위합니다. 두번째 argument까지 포함해버릴 수도 있을것 같네요.
To begin with, birds shold not be accepted because they surely cause many problems like making mess. The serious problem is that it will lead people to get got stressful. For example from my personal experience, when I was young I lived in a huge house which has had birds nest. Even though it was good for my family since we were able to hear their songs every morning (incomplete sentence ). It made me refresh. 맥락상 그리고 주장을 뒷받침해주는 내용이 아니라 필요없는 부분인것 같습니다. However, my mother should had to deal with thier excreta, and finally she got ill (갑자기 ill). Not only this, they may make troblues because sometimes their singing is so distractive. For these reasons they should be benned banned.
글의 요지는 ban하느냐 마느냐가 아닙니다. ban은아예 강제로 쫓아내버리는 거죠 :)
In addition, their nests on the city are eyesore. The more citys cities develop, the more citys arrange and clean cities get organized and clean. However, the birds don't know what are adapting and pure at all, (inappropriate and unclear expression) so the nests will be still dirty. Most people don't want this, so it will bring about big problem. Therefore, birds need to be denied, while they are beneficial in some ways.
body2가 너무 짧습니다. need more logical explanation.
In conclusion, I wholeheartedly believe that birds must not be allowed to make their nest on city buildings. The reasons are not only they will bring serious problems, but also it is not good in terms of aesthetics. For these reasons, Thus,(reasons 라고 했는데 또 for these reasons하면 이상하므로) I agree with the idea that we should block them to from making their nest on city buildings. |