Some students might complain that they should be required to take at least one class that teaches different cultures. In my opinion, however, I feel that learning the culture of other countries is very important because you can more understanding better understand about different culture, thus you might success succeed when you work with foreign people at the global market.
To start with, learing the culture of other countries allow you to have a chance to make a lot of foreign friends because you might be able to more understand friends of other countries. While something is nothing for people of our culture, that might be able to be very rude ??. For instance, there was a Chiness Chinese friend to me of mine some time ago. I said to him that Chiness Chinese who eat strange food such as spiders or scorpion is very abhorrent and dirty. and then, the friend was angry with my these kind of mention comment which ingore chiness and said that I shouldn't ignore Chinese. eventually I lost my the only my only foreign friend. If i had known about the culture of Chiness in advance, I wouldn't have lost lose my friend.
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In addition, studying other cuture helps you success at the global market, the more globalized world is, the more concern you need to. You may meet foreign buyer for business or may gain a position which deals with foreign customer. By learning about culture of different countries, you can be good at these situation. My aunt, Ms choi, for example, she was in position which dealt with foreign buyer who come from Russia. Although she hadn't traverled Russia, she was learn about Russia's culture from many books. she was able to deal with the buyer politely, finally she had been promoted
In short, studying culture of other countries is beneficial since It allow you to have a chance to a make many foreign friends, in addition it helps you success in your job. therefore I firmly believe that all the university students should be required to take at least one class that teaches other culture
아주매우 허접한 쓰레기지만 고수님들의 깨알같은 첨삭 부탁드립니다. ㅠ