Many people who consider academic success important value in young might insist that elementary school student should need to spend a lot of time for experiencing many vivid and interesting thing as well as studying. They also should spend their time for exercising or doing physical activity.
To start with, juvenile student need to spend their time for finding interested and vivid thing such as traditional culture experiences or historic place. those thing may help young students to have a faster and deeper understanding. As the old saying of korea goes that it is better to look than to litsen tentime, In this sense, vivid experiences are very important every person covered young students. In order to go through many interesting experience. Elementary school student need to have more spare time. From my experience, I used to go many musiums and cultural assets in young with my family. thus now, I think that I more understand than other people about The history of korea. these experience is very useful for me
In addition, children should spend their time for excercising or doing physical activity. since It is important for children to improve their physical development by exercising with their friends. add to that, I firmly believe that these kind of physical activity affect to children's sensitive. maybe these are likely to i nfluence development of emotion. For instance, my younger brother who has attend military service now enjoyed many physical action such as just running, Taegundo, boxing. thus he has became very healthy guy and had placid emotion. I think he was helped by these experience
In short, It is very important for young student to enhance their physical and mental development by exercising in their free time. moreover, since they are able to get lots of lively knowledge, It is important to experience many thing. In this regard, I entirely degree that elementary school student should take classes eleven month per year for their education
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