Observing or studying animals can teach us a lot about human nature
Since animals are always around us, people are familiar with them and suppose that we know lots of features of animals. <- 왜 언급하신거죠? So, some people who studied animals might argue that we can learn lots of similarities from them. However, I strongly believe that people and animals cannot be compared for several reasons. First, they cannot control by themselves ??. Second, there exist distinct animal own nature ???.
주어진 statement는
우리가 동물을 연구 관찰함으로 인간의 본성에 대해 배울 수 있다. 입니다.
괜히 human nature라는 단어를 집어넣은 것이 아닐테니까요 :)
약간 애매할수도 있는데 동물본성을 두고 내용을 다루면 훨씬 효과적이고 좋을듯 싶습니다.
그리고 ??부분은 말이 안되는 부분이라 고치기가 뭐해서 그냥 놔뒀습니다 :)
First of all, people cannot imagine predict how animals react. Some people may believe they train their animals and they can control them certainly. However, it is not true. They have wild-nature instinct on their DNA and it often harms people. For example, about 1 month ago, my neighborhood had a terrible accident. 7 years old boy walked narrow street and he met the big dog who was way bigger than him. The dog had been hanging out in the street but adults did not care about it since they believe that the dog do never attack people. Unlike people’s belief, the dog showed crazy behavior and eventually attacked him that led the boy was killed. Unlike animals, we can forecast people’s behavior and usually the prediction is correct. Through this experience, I realized that animals are unpredictable and we cannot compare human and animals nature.
인간의 행동을 예측한다는 것은 보편적으로 받아들여지는 사실이아니므로 조금더 설명이 필요합니다.
Moreover, animals have their distinct nature. There are lots of documentary programs on TV which present about animals life style. By watching various animals, we can recognize that they have particular nature which is totally different in nature of people. Let me take a bird for example. When a bird raises their babies, they do not care about every single baby. Mom birds listen carefully to their baby’s crying sound and only give the prey to the baby whose crying sound is high enough. This is because they want to give chance to only few babies who is more likely to survive in danger and in competitive society. However, human nurture their babies whether they are weak or strong. Suppose one baby was born with a disease, parents would try to put all efforts and time to recover the ill and care the baby to grow strongly. In this sense, we can figure out that animals have certain features to survive in a wild and people have their own way to live life.
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To summarize what I mentioned above, by observing and studying animals, people cannot learn about people’s nature. First, people cannot imagine how animals react. Second, animals have their distinct nature.