People usually concern about automobile as an amazing invention of human. In some aspect, there is no doubt that automobile has been pretty helpful. However, the machine make many problems which can threaten human life. Therefore, I strongly believe that automobile brings many problems rather than benefits. I'll discribe about the problem and some reasons to support my opinion.
First, automobile has made many serious environment problems. What make automobile operates is fossil fuel. However, using fossil fuel causes dangerous and toxic gases which can be harmful both of ecosystem and human health. Furthermore, the gases cause Global Warming, which is a phonomenon about disappearing important atmosphere atmospheric layer. Therefore, though automobile has brought many development, ultimately, it is harmful rather than helpful in long term perspective. To help understanding, I'll give an example. There in a man who earn money by selling toxic plant. One day, the man wanted to be a rich, so he started to extend the cultivate of the plant. In this sense, he can eventually become a rich, but his health will gradually worse. 이 예시는 별로 적절하지 않아보이네요. 차라리 toxic gas가 우리에게 피해를 주는 과정을 묘사하거나 그 예를 드는것이 더 낫지않을까 싶습니다 :)
Second, automobile causes a lot of car-accidents which is one of the most huge largest part of human death rate. Nowadays, we can easily find cars anywhere. This means that there are plenty of cars in modern society, and there are drivers as many as the number of cars (차량수만큼 운전자가 있다는 말인가요? ). However, every drivers is not always perfect not all drivers drive perfectly. They can make a mistake, like dozing, and almost all of the mistakes directly cause accidents because there are many other cars. Furthermore, car accidents usually bring many casualties. In other words, automobile make people die rather than to help them live longer are died rather than help to live longer. In this sense, because of the danger, we can say that automobile is problematic rather than helpful.
In conclusion, automobile has brought many benefits and help to achieve many developments, however, because automobile sets more serious threat to human rather than benefits. The automobile can be considered as a problematic thing. In other words, because health, which is basic quality of human, is more important than anything else, and automobile threatens the basic quality, I can say that automobile is a problematic thing rather than a helper. |