How do movies or television influence people's behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
As far as I am concerned, I strongly think that films or television affects people’s action because people want to be similar with celebrities in TV or films. Besides, advertising in TV or movies prompts people to consume products.
Television and movies influence people’s behavior because people want to be attractive such as and ideally want to become like beautiful celebrities in TV and films. For instance, my sister have seen watched a music program. It broadcasts many gorgeous girls groups 이런 문장 너무 식상합니다. 변형하여 이렇게 많은 디테일이 나올 수 있습니다. 디테일한 문장은 심사관들에게 점수를 딸수있으니 최대한 자세하게 쓰도록 노력해보세요.:) 제가쓴건 비교적 약하지만, 이런 상세한 문장들을 만들으려 노력해보세요. There are overwhelming amount of music programs being broadcasted on a lot of TV channels. The programs consist of many famous music stars who are wearing flashy, fabulous clothes. The people watching it are drawn into the show by their powerful dance and gorgeous voices, not to mention their attractive appearances.
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Other than gathering fans, these good looking so-called idols 'unintentionally' create an urge inside the viewers. The crave and desire to be like and appear like one of them. My sister was not an exception. My sister used to say to me that I she would like to change my her hair style like the girls groups on the program. Also she is willing to buy clothes which are worn by famous actress in movie. Likely, many people are oversensitive to celebrities who are shown by TV to be similar with them.
In addition, advertising in TV or movies provoke people to buy goods. Whenever you watch TV, you definitely see many kind of advertising which encourage people to purchase their commodities. For example, I would like to buy (나는 단순히 사고싶다 가 아니므로 ->I feel like I have to buy) a cosmetic which pretty actress use (They're not actually using so it's better to say -> which are advertised by pretty looking actresses) even if I do not virtually need it. Furthermore, many people may be able to think that they can be gorgeous once they use products which are advertised by TV or movies.
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Overall, there is no doubt that TV or films have great impact on people’s behavior in that people want to be similar with famous act or actress in TV. Also advertising in TV and movies induce people to buy goods even if they are not really need them. |