People have many reasons to attend school. I think that people decide to go to school because people can expend knowledge. There are two reasons why I feel this way. One reason is that people can learn various knowledge and coursework at school. The other reason is that people cannot also not only get extra knowledge but also general subjects.
궁금한데 cannot also, but 용법이 있는건가요? 요즘첨삭하는 에세이마다 자주보네요 :)
First, people who attend school can learn diverse knowledge and courses. To explain, they have to take a course core subject core subjects such as mathematic, English and history, and they learn (core subject가 아니므로) extra curricular subjects like art and music. When students go to school teachers who majored in something like teaching course teach many subjects (뜻전달을 분명하게 하는것이 중요합니다. teachers who majored in something teach many subjects라고만 써놓으면 그냥 교육같은 어떤전공자 한사람이 많은 과목을 가리킨다 라는 별 포인트없는 문장이됩니다) . These teachers studied their major and professional education for over four years. Thus, students believe teacher career 학생들은 교사경력을 믿는다?, and they learn studies from teachers (너무 원론적인 문장이에요. 학생들은 교사들에게 배운다.). For example, I have one friend who studies only at home. She studied all subjects with her parents. She could not learn professional contents because she was not enough 충분하지 않았다라는 뜻을 표현하시려 한것이라면 it was not enough 입니다 그리고 뒤에 이어줘야죠 :)with just searching book and the Internet or asking parents. Also, she took private lessons about music and arts to learn various subjects, so she spent a lot of money 돈얘기는 다소 갑작스럽습니다. because of these lessons. Hence, if people go to school students will learn a lot of subjects or knowledge at school.
Second, children who attend school cannot learn also general knowledge but other knowledge that needs society ??. What I mean is there is much important knowledge such as about social community. If children go to school, they can commute with many friends and teachers. The children can do experience little society. They will learn social relationship, manner and competition. For instance, there is experimentation about children who attend pro-school and do not attend pre-school. Before elementary school, one child goes to pro-school (오타조심), and another does not. After attending elementary school, people find out these children. Surprisingly, although they know writing letters both parties ??, children who attended pre-school the past could speak various words and behave mannerly more (How did they logically determine this? Seems like a loose example). Therefore, students can master usual subjects and social knowledge.
In conclusion, I think that people decide to attend to school because people can expend knowledge. This is because they can learn a lot of courses and information, and teachers and school study many general courses and social skills to students.
문법이나 표현문제가 많네요.
내용전달이 불분명하거나 잘 되지 않습니다.
앞으로는 실제 문제를 가지고 한번 해보세요 토플자료게시판에 writing topic도 많고 시험환경모드도 :)
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