"When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
It has been a controversy whether people succeed due to luck. Some people give a story of the need of luck that
To begin with, If people succeed, there is lots of preparing in order to bearing fruits. Only prepared people can catch the success when it come to them. For example,
Second, without continuous efforts, people succeed just for a while. The long success is needed the continuous efforts. To illustrate, In Korean fairy, there are two different brothers. The older brother is so lazy in work, but the elder brother was very laborious and always had saved his salary. After their parent was died, the lazy one inherited every parent's properties. Passing decades, the negligence one had lost all of the inheritance but the other became a rich by working hard everyday.
In conclusion, Though some people assert that luck is relevant in order to attend success, I strongly agree with above statement due to continuous efforts and the need of preparing before. Therefore, luck has nothing to do with entering the succeeding gateway.
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