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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students' sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. | |
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It has been the recent controversy that Universities should give the same amount of money to their students' sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Some people by giving an example of this statement -> Even though stating the examples for this statement, some people would argue that University more and more invest in lots of books due to releasing a lot of new books. -> needs much more investment in books due to a new reealising books.It is no doubt that the following statement is correct -> true or not for these following reasons: doing sports activities give physical health to us. And It can improve -> improves the socialization because the sports activities such as soccer, basketball, and so on need player's harmony.
To begin with, doing the sports activities result in the physical health. That is, it would make -> makes our muscles strong . In universities investing in the sports activities,이해가 안되요 if I want to do some exercise, i can exercise the physical athletics.이해가 안되요 For example, When i got the severe cold, doctor said that after recovering, I should get some exersice. However, my -> our university had no implement in order to grow -> strengthen the health. So -> Therefore, i had to pay lots of money to the individual fitness in person. Investing in the sports activities could result in saving my money.
Not only that, It has effect on growing the socialization. In other words, playing the sports activities with many people encounters the bucks of cases and solves them. It can bear the full of physically health body. For example, once I joined the soccer club, I was playing it with many players. I had -> was in troubles due to meeting so many cases.자세한 설명 All the soccer players needed the harmony and treatment.
In conclusion, they are stories, revealing that sports activities can bear fruit like the socialization and physical health. I strongly believe that Universities should give the same amount of money to their students' sports activities as they give to their university libraries | |
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