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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : the news media is a reliable source of unviased information |
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A lot of controversy exists over whether the news media provide people with truly -> true information. Some people may believe that news is best source of information as its article usually is made by trustworthy and reputable people such as professional journalist and celebrity. But I strongly believe that news media is untrustworthy. This is mainly due to the fact that news media has owns its stakes and deliberately distort their article for sales.
To begin with, news media tend to be concerned with stakeholders. In other words, main source of income that news media depend on is advertisement. So, these companies that give advertisement have immerse influence on news media’s coverage, especially related to their company. The best example of this is TOYOTA company. As you know, TOYOTA went through hard time because of recall problem. At first, when this recall problem emerged as a newspaper article, TOYOTA forced the news media not to bring up the question. The News media have no choice but to give up more doing in-depth report because TOYATA was one of the biggest company to give advertisement. This reflects that news article is largely influenced by their stakeholder.
In addition, News media aren’t like to depict some ture articles Instead they tend to describe their articles more sensational and colorful. One significant reason is that the number of selling is directly related news media corporation’s revenue. Although these media pretend to be unbiased information for reader, articles that wrote these companies are almost magnified and even false. For example, a Korean internet newspaper reported that a famous Korean musician killed himself. In fact, this article was deceiving reader with provocative theme and was written for marketing. Surprised -> Surprisingly this article, people read this article and revenue of the media was increasing. Although the Korean internet newspaper apologized to people for these distortion, the company still are notorious for these distortions.
To summarize, news media can’t provide unbiased and trustworthy information. Because, they are related to their stakeholder but they need to concentration their revenue on that truly article. When we read a newspaper, we need to critically analyze article in order to see correctly. | |
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