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In this 21st century society, people learn how to be cooperative with people. It reflects the society’s trend that, society encourages people to work as a group. It is already proven fact that working as a group brings better result. It can be also applied to study. When students study as a group, then they can show better result. Therefore, group working is better than alone, because it makes students to supplement their drawbacks, and they can get inspired by competing each other.
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To begin with, studying with a group is better, since it supplements each student’s defects. In order to be developed, people need to fix their flaws. It is hard to be aware their problems alone, but they can be noticed by other people easily. Also, group members can teach help fixing problems. It is the method mostly used by teachers. For example, in math classes, teachers offer study time at least one time in 4 four(100이하의 단위는 영어로 써주는게 좋아요) classes. The purpose they do that is that students can use that time as chance to find their problem what they misunderstood. Also, through that time they find the right way or easier way to solve those questions. Not only in math classes, but also in English Language Art classes, teachers give students work period when they write short story. They also ask them to share their ideas with their friends. This process is very effective, because their friends can hear listen to their stories objectively, so they can tell them how to develop their story better. Hence, studying as a group is even proven by school teachers as a good way to study due to developing their abilities more.
In addition, studying as a group evokes students to study harder, so studying within group is good for students. The most critical element to make students to study is motivating them to students. By comparing themselves with group members, they can be inspired. For instance, there was a research that students were grouped with 4 four people before biology final exam. They studied together on the first day without any competitions. However, the next day, one student made the cue card for each chapter, and then the next day the other students made the cue cards even with highlighting. The other three kids’ grades were low, and they do not study typically. The next day, they asked each other one another and do did some quizzes. Obviously, the result was successful, all 4 four students got higher than their average grades. According to this experiment, the competition which is made in group makes people students to study hardr. Thus, apparently study in group is effective way to students.
To conclude, students need to be involved in the group when they are studying, because their shortages are easily found and also easily but effectively solved by their group members. Also, they are encouraged to study harder because of due to the atmosphere of the group. When group study hard, then students also feel that they need to study. Therefore, the group working leads students in good consequences, and obviously it is good way to improve themselves more.
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