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There is an argument over whether in order to succeed, being different from others is better than being similar to others. Some people believe that being different from others might cause argument, which can not be succeed. I, however, am of the opinion that being different from others is better than being similar to others. This is largely because innovation ideas can make successful result. Moreover, our society is so chageable that being different from others is an effective way to survive.
To begin with, thinking diffrent that is innovative can make successful result. For example, Andy wahole,who is famous pop aritst, was diffrent from others. He used normal object to make his works, which was different from other artist. However, he got high acclaim and finally became one of the famous artist. This example shows that being diffrent from others is better than being similar to others.
Moreover, our society is too changeable to being similar to others. Therefore, people need to have different ideas to survive. Accoding to a study recently released by the Korean Narional Research Center mentioned that more than two-thirds of the surveyed people try to have diffenrent experience from others to get a successful job. This study shows that having a different idea from others is related to success.
To sum up, in order to succeed, being different from others is better than being similar to others. First, thinking different can make successful result. Moreover, being diffrent from others is an effective way to survive in our changeable society.
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