▶ Your Answer :As there are increasing number of students graduating from universities seeking for a job, people often debate whether or not choosing high paying job is better than choosing the other with more satisfaction. However, from my point of view, I strongly believe that having a job that one can be happy with is more essential. The rationales behind this is are that money cannot buy everything and it is likely for a person to success when they truly enjoy their work.
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First of all, it is obvious that there are many factors that cannot be obtained at the expense of money such as one’s happiness or achievement. Although earning huge amount of money can be a way of feeling achievements, it is not possible to feel the true one. This is because true accomplishment only comes after reaching one’s goal by dedicating their endless endeavor. For instance, when I was in twenty four I used to work as a server in an illegal casino in Korea. There were no difficult tasks that required me to work hard and they paid me a lot which was roughly fifty percent more than other ordinary jobs pay. But However(But을 문장 시작할 때 쓰는건 좋지 않아요) soon after I started to make a large amount of money, it became impossible to have any dream or passions to achieve something in my life. So,Therefore(So를 문장 시작할 때 쓰는건 좋지 않아요) I decided to quit the job and got a new position as sales clerk in a department store which required me to devote whole time on working. Even they paid a lot less than I have received before, I was able to feel that I have accomplished something whenever I got paid.
Moreover, satisfaction with the job plays a pivotal role in one’s success. Usually people might think high salaries can be a motivation to go for their success, but some people often find themselves stuck in positions that they are not satisfied with. In this case, they will be easily get restless with their job and consequently will lead them to failure with their career. Recent studies have shown that employees who gave over four points out of five for the happiness, they feel with their work were used them to think more positively with their lives compare to the other side of employees. This result indicates that whether a worker enjoy their job or not should be the priority in choosing jobs.
In summary, I firmly believe that happiness and satisfaction with one’s job is very important in his successful life since money cannot be the most important factor and it can be a shortcut to a successful life. On the whole, people should consider about their life in the basis of fulfillment not the amount of money they earn.
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