Some people may argue that working wroking for a small company is more stable stability than working for a large company . However I have a different idea. When it comes to the statment that working for a small company is better than working in a large company, I have to disagree with it. *단지 disagree한다고만 쓰는 것보다 본인의 statement를 쓰는게 더 보기 좋아요:)
To begin with working for a large company has many benefits such aslike high salary. Whenever wokrers achieve the goal, company will pay for them for their as results./pay them according to their results. There is a great example supporting this idea. My brother works for samsung because he wants to get promoted(승진한다.고 쓰려면 always수동태로 써주세요. -promote:진급시키다) fast. Even though he finishes(일상적인거니까 현재형) finished the work at 6pm, he works until mid-night without orders. Now,Because of his diligence, he is not only has become a the head of a department in 5 years but also makes more money than others who are has similar in age. Thus I believe that his dream comes true since he work for large company.
*정확히 어떤점이 큰회사의 장점인지 명시되지 않은듯해요. 진급이 되서 돈을 더 많이 버는것은 결국엔 형의 성실함 때문인 것에 포커스가 맞춰져서요. 큰회사는 진급의 기회가 더 많다거나, 진급되면 받는 돈의 액수가 더 많다거나(작은회사에 비교해서).. 하는 식으로 왜 대기업이 좋은지를 써주세요:)
In addition, most of large companies don't have financial cirsises caused by because of insufficiency of funds. =지금 쓰신걸 해석하면: 돈이 많지 않기 때문에 대기업은 위기가 오지 않는다. 가 되요 ;ㅅ; So, workers don't have to care about losing their jobs. There is an example supporting this idea. A friend of mine's My friends father worked for a small company. But few years ago, in our country hasdue to the IMF crisis, so her father lost his job for a long time. At that time her family has very diffirent time to live. I saw all of this situations and I thought about crisis working for small company. *그에 반해 대기업들은 튼튼해서 넘어가지 않았다는 내용을 추가해주세요 ^^
All in all. fisrt working for large company has many benefis like high salary , Second It and those companies don't doesn't have a problme problems in about financial cirises. So I perfer to working for large company. |