The world has been developed rapidly, because of machine. Nowadays people can do lots of things by using them. Moreover, they can save their time and enjoy a comfortable life. Therefore, I believe that doing work with machine is better than hand. There are a couple of reasons why I hold this opinion. When people use the machine, people can do work more accurate and faster than doing by hand. In addition as I mentioned above, people can save time by using the machine.
First of all, machines can do work accurate and fast. IT industry, for example, all of producing process are executed by machine. It requires very intricate and precise works. So, people cannot do it well. To be illustrate a bit more, computer calculator, for example. Let's compare between people's ability to calculate and computer's one. computer is more faster and accurate than people. Likewise, there are a lot of advantage in using machines in the world. If people use the machine, they will prevent to make mistakes which is people's error.
Not only that, people can reduce their working time by using machines. There are many kinds of machine to save our time by working instead of people's doing. Dishwasher, for example, people just put in dishes in the machine and push the start button. After several minutes later, dishes will be clean and sterilized. In my case, I used to wash dishes by my hand. It takes about 30 minutes but when I use the dishwasher, it just takes 10minutes. If people use this machine, they can save their time to wash dishes and enjoy their leisure time. The other machines which can provide people a convenient life such as laundry, vacuum, microwave, and refrigerator and so on. How nice it is!
In conclusion, people live an improved life by developing machines. Moreover, people going to develop machines in order to better life. Machines are indispensible instruments in our life. Owing to machine, we can enjoy our life more exciting and ambling. For these reasons, I think that it is better to do work by machine than by hand.
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