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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Watching a movie and reading a book are better than physical exercise to relax. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay. | |
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An ongoing debate exists over whether reading a book or watching TV is better than doing exercise when people relaxed-> relax. Some people prefer to stay home and read a book or watch a movie in their free time because it is more effective to relive their stress. My view, however, is that doing some exercise is greatly better than just stay-> staying home due to the fact that it gives me a lot of health benefits, so it helps me to live without any worries in my old ages. Futhermore, doing a simple sports everyday is a shortcut to be-> being a diligent person.
To begin with, exercising regularly helps me to live longer in good health conditions. These conditions does not built in a day.-> These conditions don't get built in a day. In order to have no disease and live happily with my husband, I should prepare my future by exercise from now on. Therefore, I have to make doing exercise regularly as my habit and go to health club everyday at fixed time. As an example, my grandmother doesn't like to go outside and she just want to stay home everyday. I knew that it would not good-> not be good for her so I always asked her for take a walk,-> her to take a walk but she never assented. So her physical condition became weaker and weaker to this day. I really worry about her. And this is a great reason that I suggest this opinion.
On top of that, going outside and exercising regularly in break time is very useful because it makes me live a industrious life. Once I decide to exercise everyday, it will not only help me to be healthy but also teach me a way to manage my time -> manage my time well. If I stay home and watch TV on sofa in my leisure time, It would be so easy for me to become lazy because with a remote control device, I need just -> all I need is just one finger to move-> move to any channel I want, so it goes without saying that I would get my weight.-> it goes without saying that I will become more and more tiresome to move around. This will eventually ~~~~~...
All things considered, I think going to play sports or exercising in health club in my free time is better than staying home. Of course, lying in bed or sofa and read a interesting book or watch a exiting movie might make me feel more relaxed and relived, but if I consider my future,-> future를 생각한다면 책을읽어야 할지도 모르죠. 따라서 health in the future, I should undoubtedly do exercise.
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