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Opinions might be divided over whether school development is main reason of prospecting countries. People from different walks of life may take different stance on this issue. Personally, I believe development of school is the most effective way of doing so, and there are two reasons that could can validate my position.
First of all, school's image has positive impacts on profits of country. As everyone knows, stronger country's image is not the only way of earning profits country, but in my opinion, it is one of the influential causes. Let's say that your school has won 'UCLA basket ball world championship'. The big news spread out swiftly around the world and many famous sports players start to pay a great deal of attention for to your school. As a result, this effect will bring numerous visitors from other countries. In this way, improved school' image can be closely related to country's development.
Students are our future. Although there are many factors of successful of development of a country,those help develop country, nothing could be more important than students. Boston is a good example. Boston is one of the biggest cities in the world and better educational environment is considered for as the reason of such strength. Nice high schools and universities bound in the city, besides such schools, a large number of private institutes can satisfy student’s desire for of education beyond their classroom. Also a lot of tutors who can give private lessons are readily available. These students will lead the city toward world class. This illustrates the important of students for the positive country.???
Taking all of these things into account, it is clear that country should invest in school that will cause a great deal of profits and positive future of the country. People who are not in favor to the investment for in school would have to reconsider these priceless merits.
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