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Many people try to make a lot of money through lottery or stock. They just believe that they should often take a risk for succeeding.to succeed. However, I strongly believe that people can get success from careful planning. This is because, the life by planning is more stable and people can easily recover by planning when they fail.
First of all, people who have plan have more stable life. Although people take more longer time than people who suddenly become rich, they all people who have plan finally accomplish their goals. For instance, my father took 10 years to get his own house and always had his own plan for using usage of money. Even though one of his friends got a lot of money from stock, he never tried to invest money to stock because he knew that it is very hard to make money from stock and investing to stock sometimes had give a chance??? to lose all money. In fact, some of his friends had a bad luck in investing to stock, and they were almost bankrupted. Therefore, he achieved his goal of life and never experienced big risk.
On top of that, planning is the resource to inspire people when they experience the failure. All people are not perfect, so they often make a huge mistake. It is connected with their success. However, they can overcome their mistake by using kind of plan B if they have their own plan. For example, my little brother could not enter the university which he wanted because his university entrance exam scores was so poor. However, he did not be did not frustrated with the result and had another plan. Thus, he enlisted military. Even though he had a very hard time at the military, he did not give up to study studying in his spare time. Thus, he took again the university entrance exam again after being discharged from military. After all, he could enter to his dream school.
In short, people can achieve success by cautious planning because planning life can lead to succeed more stably and people are easily able to restore their damage from failing by planning. In conclusion, we should plan carefully throughout our whole life in order to achieve success and fully enjoy our life.
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