HOMEMADE FOOD OR FAST FOOD
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We can think of some advantages and disadvantages of fast food and homemade food.
First of all, if we see from good ways of eating fast food, it’s not time-consuming. If we want to have fast food for lunch whenever you want, you can go to the fast food shop and pay money for ordering fast food that you want. Even it’s not good shaped or smells bad, it has to be fast enough which fill your hunger faster. On the other hand, it could be bad for your health. Because people use quite a lot of materials such as oil, therefore fast food contains partly big amount of fat. It increases cholesterol inside of our human body. That means if we eat too much fast food, our health gets worse and worse.
Homemade food, for, one good for your body I guess. But all food that homemade is not certainly good for your health. Further it’s slow food which is opposite meaning of fast food. You necessarily need quite long time to make food by yourself. On the other hand, the food which is made by you is reliable. This is good for people who are not able to believe the ways that they make the fast food. Because they might think that the food contains bad materials. And people could get confidence from cooking if they are good at cooking.
According to these paragraphs, there are quite many advantages and disadvantages. But I prefer homemade food rather than fast food because cooking is the most influential job in my life so far.
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