■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic 학생이 선생님을 evaluate 하는게 필요 or 불필요? | |
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There has been an ongoing debate over whether it is necessary for teacher to be evaluated by their learners or not. Some people argue that it is meaningless to make an evaluation of teachers by students since their assessment is not accurate , and there is no exact standard for evaluation. However, I strongly believe that it is necessary for teachers to be evaluated by their learners ; enhancing the quality of lesson and increasing attention of students on their lecture.
Above all, by evaluating their own teachers, students allow to draw more attention on the lecture. This is because they will have a responsibility to evaluate their teacher accurately. Since teacher's position is much upper than students and students have to respect them and follow them. However, this evaluation will attract many students because it is very interesting things for them to evaluate person who is knowledgeable than themselves. Therefore, they will listen to the lecture more carefully in order to catch out teacher's teaching style and evaluate them. For example, when I was in 8th grade, my school offered opportunity for every student to evaluate their teachers. Due to the fact that it is not common chance, I was really try my best to evaluate every single teachers. Automatically, I tended to concentrate on the lecture better, because I had to catch either good points and some points that can be improved through the lecture.
On top of that, getting evaluation from students, teaches will encourage to make a better lesson with more preparation. It is obvious that everyone want to get good evaluation and reputation from others, because individual have to concern about other people in order to be recognized. In other words, teachers will try harder to get a great comment by using different methods. For example, they can utilize visual aids or video clips to attract students with more interesting topic. Also, they can research the best way to transmit their knowledge to students in easier way. The best illustration of this phenomenon is my uncle , Helen. She used to be a highschool chemistry teacher , and she put a lot of her energy and effort for the lecture during the evaluation period. Specifically, she made a funny chant to memorize the periodic table. This new innovative chant was really attractive to students, because they had to just memorize the whole thing previously . The result is, fortunately, Helen got a reward as a best teacher of the year in her school, and every her student received really good score on the quiz about the periodic tables.
As a concluding remark, it is necessary for teaches to be evaluated by their learners to maintain smoother lecture and better interaction between students and teachers. The reason is that teacher will wok hard and prepare a lot before the class to get good reputation , and student will focus on their lecture to evaluate better. All in all, evaluating of teacher by student is more of an opportunity than a sacrifice. | |
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