Nowadays, many people tend to prefer to have their own(자기소유의.adj) a business to being an employee because, people believe that having an their own a business is the only the way to be successful and make a lot of money a lot. However, many people have their own business but many people cannot success on their works due to a lot of risks. not everyone can success simply by starting their own company. Thus, I firmly believe that being an employee has more benefits and guarantees stability. their stable job and life.
Most importantly, by being an employee can guarantee their a stable job. When people embark on their own business they need needs a keen insight about current market trend and several complicated steps to establish established their tasks (establish one's task라는 말은 부자연스러운듯해요.)and also need a lot of money to invest. ...they need keen insight, complete knowledge of the current market trend and legal matters, and a lot of money for investment. However, all these steps have a lot of risks such as a mistaken prediction or a slow economy. For example, my cousin opened had an internet shopping mall, and it was very good sales at the beginning. However, a year later, Korea suffered from IMF crisis for a long time, and her business was collapsed. On the other hand, people belong to companies as employee has too much lower risks than those people.
Furthermore, employees live more stable lives. by being an employee can guarantee their stable life. Many people believe that having a regular schedule on their job is the most important thing when choosing a workplace. s to choose companies. Many companies have regular schedule such as a five-day workweek and 9am to 5pm a day. When the regular schedule pattern is broken, people can get a lot of stress from unstable life. Unlike those people, people who have their own business keep irregular hours due to a lot work to do, for instance, they have to work late or work on the weekend as well for their business to prosper the business. For those reasons, people can damage their health too. Due to all these reasons, stable life is impossible when running a business. All these reasons unable to guarantee stable life.
As mentioned above, many people quit their job and start a business for the success in their life. However, having one's own a business cannot any guarantee stable life that everyone dream of. all people dreaming. Thus, I would prefer to be an employee than have own my own business.