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Human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. 26min~4min
Recently, there was a great wildfire in Russia that destroyed approximately 10% of the amount of the grains the world consumes. Moreover, Asian countries such as China are suffering from humongous flood this summer. Likewise, the world is confronting severe natural catastrophes that are more destructive than the past. These havocs are used as valuable resource for the researchers who assert that the emission of carbon dioxide of human species is the main cause of such climate changes. In this sense, I emphatically believe that human activity is making the Earth far away from being better place to live, to both human and animal species.
To begin with, human’s activity is making its living condition unfavorable than before. When contrasting pictures that were taken in the past and in the present, people would feel proud in that the living places that are shown in the picture seems to be more convenient and comfortable. However, although people’s lives require less efforts and chores, it is undeniable that the environment has been destroyed enough to threat people’s lives. As the result of the industrial movements and developments to build cities, the environment is being polluted with harmful gases, liquids and trashes that cannot be deteriorated in natural process. This pollution is making air less cleaner, and water dirtier so that people have to buy water instead of drinking it directly from the rivers or the creeks. Because of this, people are suffering from myriads of diseases and water depletion. Moreover, the gases further go on and cause the global warming phenomenon, which makes the climate warmer. This is provoking serious problems such as rising sea levels, failure in crop harvesting, and more frequent explosion of fuel tanks. For instance, the island that is located in the Pacific Ocean called Tuvalu had to yield its land to the sea, due to the rising sea level. Currently, many people of the country are being refugees of the near countries and lost their homes where their ancestors lived throughout the generations. In this regard, human activities are jeopardizing people themselves to live in less desirable condition.
Furthermore, human’s activity is rendering the Earth to become harsher place to live for the animals. As the human expands their living place, more places are being developed as cities to enhance people’s comfort in their daily lives. In contrast to the people’s advantageous changes, myriads of animal species are experiencing or already been extinct due to the decreasing amount of wild territory due to such human’s expansion. To elaborate, species such as panda that lives on rare foods such as bamboo trees that only grows in clean forests is experiencing extreme starvation for the trees have been cut by people who wanted it as luxurious decoration and people who wanted to enlarge their territory. Consequently, panda has become one of the rarest animals in the world due to human activities. Moreover, coral reefs are rapidly becoming bleached due to the warmer climate the human have brought forth, and water pollution. This can cause serious disaster in oceanic ecology for the coral reefs serve as shelter for numerous fishes and marine animals by offering protection from animal, place to rest, and devour. Considering such significant roles of the coral reefs, it seems obvious that human activities are having detrimental effects to animals’ lives. In this respect, human activities made our planet not a better place to live, especially for the animals.
In light of all circumstances, it seems obvious that the human activity is worsening the living condition of the human and other species.
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