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A large shopping mall may have both positive and negative effects people who live near it. Therefore, it is controversial whether a large shopping center has an advantage among people or not. I believe that a large shopping center have good factors to residents. There are two major reasons why I think so : to give us convenience and to develop our town.
First of all, a large shopping center is very useful for residents. This is mainly because it has many kinds of stores, theaters, restaurants, etc. For example, before our town didn't have a big shopping mall, I had to drive to shopping center to buy groceries about for about one hour. I was always was exhausted after I came back home owing to driving. It was especially very dangerous to drive during the evening because the road was so dark. Experts have verified that especially women, people who have a big shopping center near their home feel more happier than women have a small shopping center near them. Thus, I believe that a large shopping center gives many convenience and make women happy.
In addition, our town will develop owing to increasing revenue. One significant reason is that people is are likely to come together near the big shopping center. If the population of our town rises, our town can easily develop more than other cities. A lot of people will consume much money in shopping center and move to our town. For instance, our town was so small that we don't didn't have more building that is 3-floor highbuilding. The price of our house is so low compared to that of next town. After building a big shopping center, many kinds of jobs and income are increasing.increased. Our town started to change and many people crowd to here. town became crowded. Studies have indicated that increasing the opportunity of jobs is a major factor in developing countries. In this sense, the development of a city will seriously affects our income.
In conclusion, I think that building a large shopping mall have an a positive effect on people. As I mentioned above, we will be convenient and upbuild our town through this process. The more people realize this, the better the society will become.
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