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One side of fence some people argue against spending the whole school day for studying and the other side of fence others argues in favor of participating physical exercise classes. From my perspective, I agree with the latter opinion because physical exercise has a beneficial benefits to students for their studying and improving social skills.
First of all, if the students take part in physical exercise class, they can effectively focus on studying. Studying for a long time without free time is not easy for every student. For this reason, through exercising, students can improve their physical health as well as mental health. For example, when I was a high school student I always spent a day for studying and I did not take part in PE class. After I took a mid-term exam, however, my grade was not good than I thought so that I realized it is not effective way to study for a long time. From that time, I was starting started to participate exercising class and enjoy that time to play playing games with my classmates. As I run our school field, I released my stress which received from my academic study as well as my health improved than before. Therefore, physical exercise is very helpful for students studying to study better.
Additionly, not only will the students study better but they can improve their social skills through exercising class. Academic knowledge is important to be successful in the world today, but it is not everything. For this reason, improving social skills through physical exercise class als is essential. For example, when students run a field to playing soccer with thier friends, they can learn some lessons from soccer such as sense of responsibility, cooperation and teamwork. These social skills are crucial components for their future lives. By cultivating these skills, students learn how to deal with others successfully in real social settings. Therefore, physical education is a crucial part of the learning process.
To sum up, no one can deny denies the important importance of physical and mental health for of students. If there is a physical exericise class on the students schedule table, students are much more can concentrate more on studying and can develop social skills that is those are need for our future lives.
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