In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
These days, a growing number of people are prolonged to live longer now. There are few reasons. Developing medical sciences, increasing life qualities, existing lots of enjoyment. Recently, most people believe it that it causes living people to live longer than past times from due to development of science. If so, this phenomenon causes from science, there are vast realms development.
To begin with, the first reason is medical science improvement.improvement of medical science. Long time ago, people suffered many diseases, but they did not care because at the that time they did not have any technological remedies. Thus, many people died by diseases. At In these time,days human incessantly investigate about bacterium, medicine, and other indispensable investigation for a good living quality. For example, the most fatal disease is known as AIDS. A lot of people are sufferring from this disease and dying but, medical scientists try to find antidotes on AIDS. Recently, those are now being inventing now. So,Therefore, medical science improvement is a one of important thing about people are living longer.
In addition, improved people's living qualities is another aspect.. For instance, recently, most people don't need to worry what they eat or live because it is became very basic requirments. Just 50years ago, most people worried about those reasons with out few affluent people. Many people died from starvation but now, we have abundant provisions in the world. We distribute for starving people such as Somalia in the Africa.
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