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In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the
causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your
essay. These days, a growing number of people are
prolonged to live longer now. There are few reasons. Developing medical
sciences, increasing life qualities, existing lots of enjoyment. Recently, most
people believe it that causes living longer than past times from development of
science. If so, this phenomenon causes from science, there are vast realms
development. To begin with, the first reason is medical
science improvement. Long time ago, people suffered many diseases, but they did
not care because at the time did not have any technological remedies. Thus,
many people died by diseases. At this time, human incessantly investigate about
bacterium, medicine, and other indispensable investigation for a good living
quality. For example, the most fatal disease is known as AIDS. A lot of people
are sufferring from this disease and dying but, medical scientists try to find
antidotes on AIDS. Recently, those are inventing now. So, medical science
improvement is a one of important thing about people are living longer. In addition, improved people's living qualities.
For instance, recently, most people don't need to worry what they eat or live
because it is became very basic requirments. Just 50years ago, most people
worried about those reasons with out few affluent people. Many people died from
starvation but now, we have abundant provisions in the world. We distribute for
starving people such as Somalia in the Africa. 정말 감사드립니다. 미국에서 혼자 아무런 책도없이. 한국사람도 아무도없고, 혼자 공부해야하는 상황인데, 이렇게 첨삭해주셔서,, 감사드립니다. |