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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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▶ Topic :. Books have more influence on society than television | |
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▶ Your Answer : Some poeple think that Books have more influence on society than television. however I disagree that opinion. Of course books have been being for more thounds years with human being, but A television has more influence than books. Nowadays, The Television makes us that we can take care our babies easier than befor, and influence our life.
First of all, Watching Television is one of the best way for taking care of babies. We can watch everyday, everynigh if we want to watch. TV Programs are never done, so we do not have to bother our babies for worrying. For example, my cousin MIN-GI, he married 5 years ago. He has to work every day, and his wife also has to work too. Because of that, they do not have much time for taking their baby. MIN-GI's mother come to his house for taking his baby. However, his baby is alway crying, he wants to meet his parents. At first, It was very hard working, but when his grandmother show TV to him, he did not cry anymore. After that, their faimily could concentrate their working.
Also, The Television influence our life. We are watching TV everyday. After watching, many people follow famouse people. People want to be them. They buy clothes, shoes, and bag.
Television is strong about influence of our society. On the other hands, Book is not strong such as TV. Of course It influences our life, but not strong. When we watch TV, We want to be people who are famose. However, When we read books, We don not think like that. It is important for explain that why TV is more powerful than Books.
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