Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents or other adult relatives should make important decisions for their older (15 to 18 year-old) teenage children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. |
Some people say that parents or other adult relatives should make important decisions for their older teenage children. I fully agree the opinion that adults shoud take part in their children's determination. That's because teenagers have enough ablity which decision themselves but they can easily lose their judgement than adulth do. moreover, adults' intervention help them to vital decesion when they grow up.
First of all, teenagers lack sense. so, when they should important determine, they can wrong choice. futhemore, it could affect their lifetime. to prevent this situation, teenage chidren suffer from there bad descisions, parents and other adult help them to avoid miss seletion and do better decision. For example, when childrens are determine whether they are enter college. adults help them to advice what decision is the better.
Second, when childrens grow up, they can think that adult advice their determine. when they have problem important deciding, former advice help them to easily determined. From my experience, when I young, I am 18 years old ago, I had very difficulty deciding that I go to sutdy abroad to japan. at that time, my father teach me the way determine the best importnat and far see. so, I can decide go to Japan. thesedays, whenever I decide something. I think my father's advice and it is very helpful
In conclusion, I firmly believe that parents and other adults have to make important decisions for their teenage children. |
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