Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to be a leader of a group than to be a member of the group. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. |
A leader can be described as a captain of the ship. The success of the cruise is determined by the captain strongly, which means that role of the captain is very important. So many people feel pressed and hesitate to become a leader. However, I strongly believe that being a leader is a great idea because it can be a good chance to have a confidence in one’s life and it offers many opportunities to develop such skills. First of all, being a leader makes people to develop in a spiritual aspect. When someone became a leader, he can have confidence in his life and also build responsibility. I can give example of my sister. When she was young, she was very shy girl. She always avoided doing something in front of the people and also she often missed what she had to. By chance she was elected as a leader of her class. Since then she changed his characteristics. She now has confidence in her life, no longer reluctant to being in front of people and also don’t forget what she has to do. It is true that being a leader can be a pressure to someone, but it also can be a good experience. Additionally, we can learn many important skills by being a leader. We can develop how to organize and plan. For example, I had the opportunity to be a leader of the school band. We had to perform in the school festival and we didn’t have enough time to practice. Moreover, we had to study for the midterm exam and every team one had its own schedule. It gave me a headache to organize practice time which was perfect for every member and also to prepare for the midterm exam. At that time, I was very perplexed and frustrated but had no ways. But I successfully perform in the school festival and also did well on the midterm exam by planning time effectively. It was a good lesson for me and now I’m not easily frustrated at busy schedule because of that experience. Therefore, it is a good idea to become a leader. In summary, I agree with the idea that being a leader is better than being a follower. Because it gives chance to be a more mature person and it helps people to develop such skills. It’s a pity to give way those great advantages because of mere pressure to be a leader.
ps: 시간도 안지키고 해커스라이팅 부록에있는 아이디어도 참고하고 첨 써본글이에요 ㅠㅠ 조언좀부탁드릴게요. 아이디어(예)가 너무너무 안떠올르느데 ㅠㅠ 셤장가서 제시간내에나 쓸수있을지 모르겠어요. cbt때도 딴건 다 잘나왔는데 라이팅이 4점이었거든요..사실 라이팅 준비도안했지만.. 지금도 그상황 그상태라.... 113점 이상 목표인데 스피킹 라이팅이 제 발목을 세게잡네요 ㅠㅠㅠㅠ |