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Aristoteles said, "a human is societal existence". No one can deny this
saying. As the society grows larger and larger, people live in colony and relate to
each other. It is impossible for human to live alone. Thus 'friends' must be necessary when living. Because people's characteristic is different all, there are a number of type of friends in world. I think that friends have to have a sense of humor rather than having intelligent.
First of reasons, a good humor make negative situation to positive one. People could face unpleasant situations or experience sad circumstances such as dying parents, fail the exam, getting hurt their relatives, ets, while living. When people feel sadness or loneliness, a friend is person who acknowledges them. A humor is best tools to refresh for people in despair. A humor is good ability which can not be bought by money.