Many people argue that exams give a lot of pressure to students and prevent them from studying freely, so taking exams is not a good way to encourage students to learn. However, I strongly belive that exams encourage students to learn because they study a lot to prepare for tests and the results of tests show what they need.
To begin with, most students study hard to prepare for their tests.(Good reason) Even though sometimes preparing for tests gets students stressed out, in order to get high score on the tests, students do very hard works. Some students force themselves to stay up untill late studying. For example, when I was a high school student, I used to stay study at school studying untill 10 P.M (in order) to obtain high grade. Although it was a little stressful,very stressful to me, I was able to push myself to do so. I could gain high grade and much knowledge from the study. If there had not been for the tests, would I have studied until that late time? My answer is 'NO'. It is understatement that my knowledge which has been accumulated for several years results from my hard work. It was defenitely due to exams.
reason은 나쁘진 않습니다. encourage하는 게 hard하게 만드는 것은 맞습니다.
그런데, Even though문장에서, 때때로 스트레스를 받지만, (이건 배경 한 줄도 안 주고 설명하려고 하는 것입니다.) 어떤 사회인데, 시험이 중요한 사회라서 학생들은 열심히 공부를 한다고 쓰셔야 합니다. 어떤 학생들이 열심히 한다는 게 무엇인지 모르겠습니다. 그냥 열심히 하게 되어서 시험은 encourage한다고 일관성 있게 가세요. 그리고 우리 사회는 왜 high grade를 얻어야 하는 사회인지 넣어야 합니다. high grade를 얻는 게 학생들에게 어떤 encourage가 되는지를 설명해야 합니다.
Secondly, exams show what students need. (not good reason)The results of tests can be indications for students about what aspects they should reinforce. That is, exams function as a feedback. Students can figure out what their strong point is or weak point is. By observing the results, students are able to correct themselves, set the next destination and move forward. In this sense, taking exams, analyzing them and knowing what they should do really motivates to study harder. From my personal experience, as an electrics major, while I got all A+s in physics courses, I got a B+ in math course in last fall semester. It completely showed that I have a week point over mathmatics. This result motivatied me to study mathmatics. I promised myself that I would get an A+ in math class in winter semester. I put all my effort into studying mathmatics during the semester. As a result, I got A+ on math test and confidence as well. Like what I experienced, exams stimulated me to learn hard. It affected me in a very good way.
시험이 무엇이 필요한지 보여준다는 것은 encourage하고 어떤 연관 관계가 있는지 써야 합니다. 그들이 해야 하는 것을 아는 게 동기가 된다고 했는데, 왜 그게 시험을 통해서 얻어야 하는지에 대해서 설명이 없습니다. 그리고 저런 게 주제 문장으로 가야지, exams show what students need.는 서포팅 문장입니다. analyzing them and knowing what they should do really motivates to study harder. 이런 게 encourage와 관련 있는 문장입니다. 물론 주제 문장으로 쓰려면 문장을 바꾸셔야 합니다. Through analyzing exams, students study harder(or encourage) because it lets students know what they should do. 예는 틀린 예는 아니지만 다시 쓰세요. B+에서 A+ 맞는게 어떤 게 encourage하게 된건지 이해가 잘 되지 않습니다.
In conclusion taking exams may be so stressful and annoying. However, it totally encourages students to learn harder becuase they prepare for tests for better grades and discover what they need. Although exams require hard working and much time, they are worthwhile in that students get motivatied and encouraged by them. They absoutely help students, so should continue to be given to students.
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