문제:학생들이 대학에서 선생들을 평가해야한다. 동의하는가 반대하는가?
'All humans are created equal' We all know this. This word says that all people have their own right and opinions. Students can have different idea from their professors in a class as well. Therefore, I firmly believe that students must have their own right to evaluate their teachers.
Obviously, today's education is different from the past in all aspects. In the past, students should not darely express their own perspectives in a class. Today, however, keeping our own perspectives has become one of fundmental educational virtues in school. Therefore universities have to make sure of students' right to express their voices.
There is also other fundamental reason universities have to encourage students to evaluate teachers. Teachers tend to ignore students. It is true. Thus, Universities have to know how effectively or eagerly professors are teaching their students. Through this evaluation, a university can classify the professor's worth in a class and encourage them to take care of their students more. According to my father, a professor in a university, he is usually encouraged from the survey of student.
As a result, evaluating teachers in a university is benefitial for university itself, for students and for teachers. University is a small society. All societies have to keep well-organized communication system. It is because this can make a society more happy and affluent.
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