■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Financial loans between friends can harm or damage the friendship. | |
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As the old saying goes, friend in need is the real friend. Many people also experience that they come to mind their friends at first when they need some money all of the sudden. After some reflection, however, it is evident that borrowing money from your friends is dangerous in terms of keeping your friendship. My main reasons are as follows: you consider money from your friends as the money you don't have to repay as well as you will have a conflict with your friends and ruin the relationship.
To begin with, lending money from friends isn't taken seriously. A substantial number of people don't repay money they borrow when they lend a small amount of money from friends because they think that it is acceptable not to repay between friends. Other people sometimes forget repaying money from friends on time. However, friends who gave money generally don't tell to repay because they are afraid that their relationship will be broken or they don't want their friends to consider themselves as small-minded or stingy people. To illustrate in detail, one of my friends loaned a little money from his friend several times. Even though the amount of money he borrowed was not so much, it became countless while continuing to borrow when he was in need. The friend who provided money to him didn't tell to repay, but at last he didn’t stand and asked him to repay all of the money he took with an anger. After that, he couldn’t borrow even a penny from him anymore. Accordingly, I believe that loans between friends can hurt their relationships.
On top of that, loans between friends can cause conflicts and harm friendships. Some people don't repay money they borrow from friends, and then a person who helps them can be in trouble. When he or she really needs money unexpectedly, they will tell their friends to repay the money. However, the problem happens when the friends cannot give back to them. They will fell distrust about their friends, and then their friendship will be unstable and fragile. For example, there were two people who had a big quarrel and their relationship was totally broken due to one's debt. Let's suppose that two people are A and B. A had a huge amount of debt and asked a help from B, A's best friend. B borrowed money by selling his apartment. B had to repay to A as possible as he could, but he didn't because he had another problem. A got angry at breaking their promise, and B was also furious about A didn't understand. As a result, they don't meet any more. What I want to stress is that even though friendships are strong, it is easy to disappear due to the loans between friends regardless of an amount of money.
To sum up, I strongly agree with the statement that loans between friends are hazard. This is because that people generally disregard money they lend from friends, and money from friends might cause conflicts. If you don't want to lose your friend forever, never borrow. If your friends really need your help, rather give money not expecting to repay from them. | |
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