■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. | |
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Students can become study more effectively without time and spacial restriction thanks to the technological development. Not only that, the technology also helps students to learn more effectively. Therefore, I agree that students in modern society can learn much more information and learn it more quickly than ever with technological improvement.
First of all, the technology helps students to get lots of information in any time and any places. With enhanced internet and recording skills, any students can learn what they want even though they live in abroad or in countryside, if internet were connected. In these days, to prepare graduate school, I usually watched several major lectures on internet that some universities in US uploaded. I can access to the vest number of lectures in US with just few clicks in my room. Therefore, it does not matter the place and time to study. On the contrary, students can learn more information on the internet than in traditional studying methods.
Moreover, the technology provides more effective ways to study. Back in the days, people could learn information only in books or newspapers. However, nowadays, much other equipment is used. In classes, films and pictures are very helpful to understand in some areas. Students could see pictures of few decades ago, movies concerned about historical persons, and simulated graphs from complicated equations. Additionally, sometimes students visit several historical or traditional places that were explained in textbooks. By having experience with field trips, students can not only feel and find lots of things, but also get other extra explanations without on just few lines in the textbook.
In conclusion, thanks to the technological improvement, it is easier to get lots of information as well as to learn it quicker than ever. With all the factors as mentioned above, it is clear that my agreement of the argument is sufficiently reasonable: modern technology is salubrious for students to learn. | |
힘드네요.. 가혹한 평가 부탁드려요. ㅠ
첨삭 해주시는 분들께 미리 감사하다는 말씀 올립니다. ^^