There are lots of information and explanation in books. It is usually used by teachers and students for learning. Therefore, people treat written work as the best source in education. However some people believe that we can learn more by watching television than reading books. Entertainment shows may disturb students from studying. Still, other programs such as documentaries, educational programs, and News can teach us more than books can.
-> 일반적인 의견들을 얘기하고있는 상태인지 자신의 의견을 필역하는 상태인지 명확하지 않습니다.
좀더 분명하게 구분하여 주장을 해주시면 좋겠습니다. :)
People can learn more through Documentary shows than books. It presents an authentic material about events without any fictional addition. When it is shown in television, we get to see the program that consists of important information from several books.-> 이문장과 앞에 fictional addition과 아무런 상관이 없어보입니다. Not only that, we can also feel the past.-> feel the past 라는 표현이 다소 애매합니다. 설명을 뒤에서 하긴 하지만 Mostly, because the records are from lots of books, we get learn all the books at one time. -> feel the past를 이 문장으로 이어주면, Because we get to learn all the history books at one time, we can feel the past. 문장과 논리적으로 같은것이 되어버립니다. For example, a boy watches factual film in television about colored people’s past. Obviously, he will feel pity for them; understand why they became so aggressive. However, when a boy reads a written document, he would only be gaining little information from one book without sympathy and all. -> 근거없이 주관적으로 단정짓는서술은 하지않는것이 좋습니다.
Educational programs can teach students more than books can. Most Korean these days watch internet lecture through PMPs and notebooks-> laptops. In fact, all these lectures actually came from television shows. These academic presentations do the similar thing with school teachers. -> almost have the same effect as having a good school teacher in real life. Therefore teachers in film, teaching them with books and their information, give people more information and make the lesson more comprehensive. For example, when we learn mathematics through books, there is some confusion. The reason is that printed numbers can not show you the steps and reasons. On the other hand, students get to see all the steps and explanation through educational program.
News tells us that books can’t. It is a form of program that shows all the important information from north, east, west, and south of the world accurately and quickly. Sometimes, News also shows some history of a certain country such as Egypt and Greece. Book does show us history but not the present situation. So, we can learn more from News than books. For example, the recent earthquake in New Zealand, books tells us the past earthquakes but not the present one. However, through News, people can hear the past and present earthquakes because it usually mentions about past while talking about present.
Most people think television programs just disturb students and others from studying. However, we can find more benefits than when people watch programs such as documentary, educational programs and News. |