There are arguments about whether the most important thing of a career is the money a person earns. Some people say that money is the crucial part of a job because it is most essential thing in our life. However, I strongly believe that there are more significant aspect of a job; self satisfaction and the contribution that people make to society.
First, it is essential that people have a self satisfaction of a job. People find their life meaningful and happy by doing their job. They find a job meaningful by doing the work they like. Therefore, people are likely to be unhappy if they do work just to earn money. For example, one of my best friends went a medical school and became a doctor because he wanted to make a lot of money, but later he found it that he hated to see people bleeding. He was unhappy and eventually entered university again to become a teacher that he found it interesting and meaningful. In this sense, getting a job that can make you satisfied is most important thing.
Second, doing the job that can contribute to our society is important. It is better to do the job that serves good purpose. There are many jobs that can make a lot of money but give bad influence to people. These jobs cannot be good jobs for people just because it makes lots of money. For example, drug dealer might earn a lot of money but cannot do good things for people. They make people unhealthy and addicted to the drug. Therefore, a job that makes contribution to our society is an important aspect we have to consider.
In conclusion, the most crucial thing of a job cannot be money. People should rather consider the satisfaction that a job gives or contribution that job makes to our world.
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