Some people prefer to learn something by books while others feel more comfortable with learning by gaining experience. However, even tough books seem to have more knowledge and information, learning as a person actually experience-> learning as an actual personal experience is more effective way and also relatively more important. People will apply the knowledge from experience to other things by themselves more easily than when they learn by books. Also, there are more valuable knowledge that can only be obtained from experience.
The knowledge gained from experience is more likely to linger in people's head for a long time. When people try to gain knowledge by books, it is pretty hard and sometimes boring. The knowledge from experience makes people be more interested in something and is easy to memorize. In addition, people can understand better. For example, people will find it easier to understand a scientific concept if they have a lab-> if they do a lab on it. They will approach to new knowledge without a big confusion and can apply it to other things easily by themselves.
-> 여러가지 소주제들이 많이 나오는데 문장끝나면 또다른, 그리고 그문장끝나면 또다른,
식으로 불쑥불쑥 나오면서 논리적으로 연결이 잘 안됩니다.
머릿속에 생각나는 대로 다 적으려 하지 마시고 어떤 한 관점을 서술했으면 나는 그것이 이해가 되더라도 독자는 처음 접하는 생각일 수 있음을 알고 그에대한 명확한 이해를 시키기 위하여 디테일을 붙여주시고 또 다른아이디어로 넘어갈때에는 부드럽게 넘어갈 수 있도록 논리를 다듬어주셔야 합니다.
There are more important knowledge which can only be gained from experience. Children learn how to behave properly towards other people in their household. It is something that can not be learned by books. Also, for surgeons, how to place or use the materials in operation room is learned from experience. Furthermore, if your friend struggles to figure out how to use his cell phone that he recently bought, explaining him the process step by step and making sure that he can operate the phone by himself will be more helpful than reading out the manual.
-> 책과 비교했을때 책이 절대로 줄수 없는 knowledge를 예시로 드는것이 더 적합해보입니다.
드신 예가 전부다 책으로도 배울 수 있는 것들이며 전개를 하시다보면 방향이 빗나갈 수 있는데 그럴때는 서술한 내용이 전체적으로 어디를향해 흘러가는지 파악한다음 아예 주제문 자체를 바꾸시거나 하시면 좋습니다.
All in all, I agree to the statement that says “"Not everything that is learned is contained in books.”" The knowledge gained from experience is more important than from books in many ways. The knowledge remains longer in people's head and also there are many important knowledge that is only achieved when people actually experience something. |